Blue pencil time

[sawyl]

It looks like I've done the bulk of the work on my essay. It still needs a heavy edit — it's rather over long at the moment — and a bibliography, but it's essentially complete. True to form, I'm deeply unhappy with it. I think the expositionary stuff is ok but I think the argument section is rather feeble, which isn't a great sign, seeing as it's supposed to be a philosophy essay but at least it's now more or less over.